January College Essay 1

Do you believe that your academic record accurately reflects your abilities? Explain.

NO!! My Economics, Maths, Biology, English, Global issues grades do NOT reflect my abilities. I think I am more than just a couple of grades on the report card. Sports, music and other things like how I mingle with people, what I do for the environment and other small things cannot be graded. Even though sports and music are taken as a part of academics in some schools, I believe it is something which cannot be graded. When one is forced to play or sing pieces that he or she doesn’t like they will naturally not put their entire effort into it and therefore not play so well. But if they played something they like, they will automatically have interest in it and play it well. And the same goes for sports. Different people might look at what I just said differently, like they might say that one should be comfortable with playing anything and everything, but according to me, I think everything cannot and should not be graded.

All schools don’t have things like programs such as CARE in Woodstock which basically seeks to improve the environment. Such schools never know what the child is like when it comes to changing the environment for the betterment. Some children, like me, are into such stuff, which will never be recognised by some schools. Teachers don’t know what a child’s hidden talents are. Even if they do, it does not go on the report card. For example, a while back we had a talent show in our school and some children came up with amazing talents but none of that would go on their report. So I would say no, my academic record does not reflect my abilities accurately. 

December college essay 3

If you were to look back on your high school years, what advice would you give to someone beginning their high school career? (Simmons)

High School years, according to me, are the best years of anyone’s life. There is everything in it. You learn, you explore, you make mistakes, you love, you hate, you get jealous, make friends, make enemies, you get stressed, you have fun, you get naughty, you laugh, you cry, you make fun of others and sometimes the jokes on you. One should make the most of these years for they never return. This is the advice I would give to anyone beginning their high school career. Yes, I know many people say this, but I mean it because if I was given a chance to redo high school, I would try to enjoy it more.

A balance is required. One should try to balance the fun parts and the seriousness of the studies. One should have fun but not at the cost of their grades or attention in class. One should try to make good friends because without them, it will be impossible to have fun. But my mother always told me that one should also be clever while choosing them, because bad influence can actually change the way people look at you. She always gave me an example of herself. She went to a boarding school and once while she was in the market with her school friends, one of the girls stole a pair of earrings from the jewellery store. And when the shopkeeper complaint to the school, even my Mum got into trouble because she was in the group too. And speaking of troubles, everyone makes mistakes and everyone deserves a second chance, but repeating a mistake is a habit and bad habits are just simply bad. When someone gets into trouble during their high school years for the first time, they will be excused (well, they generally are) and one should learn from it and not cry and think that there life is over. One should be careful from the next time and remember that such incidents make good stories when they grow up! And if someone has good friends, good grades, and a good social life, then he or she has the perfect high school life.

December Article 1

Obesity Rate Falls for New York Schoolchildren

This Article by Anemonia Hartocollis 

According to this artcile in New York Times, the rates of children who are over weight or 'obese' have gone down by 5.5 percent from the last 5 years. For the last few decades the number of obese children were growing enormously and since the last 5 years, the numbers have started to decrease. Dr. Thomas A. Farley said, “This comes after decades of relentless increases,” and even though 5.5 seems to be a small number he said that it is "impressive thats it's falling at all". Mr. Bloomberg said that most of the parents think their children are fit, but "the facts tell a different story." This shift of numbers is due to parents being more strict on what their children eat, school menus being more healthy and restrictions on food products filled with fat like baked goods, soda, etc. The article also mentions that the number of white children who are obese is more than any other racial group.
It is good to see that people are taking what they eat seriously nowadays. Being thin and skinny is the "in thing" in today's world. Every other girl is on a diet. There are girls in my own school who skip meals because the food is unhealthy or "too oily". But I don't think skipping meals is a solution. They should avoid unhealthy and fattening food items but they should make it a point to eat something healthy instead. Many young girls die of anorexia every year. And reducing weight by reducing t he amount you consume is not the only way. If one is physically active, then there is no chance of putting on extra weight. Schools should not only give healthy food to the children but also encourage physical education. And now, as the number of obese children has decrease, people should try to decrease this number even more to make a healthier society. 


Vocabulary:


Word 1: Hispanic 


1. They were also higher among white and Asian children compared with black and Hispanic children, and among very young children — those entering kindergarten or first grade — compared with older children.


2. Meaning: of or relating to the people, speech, or culture of Spain or of Spain and Portugal
Origin: Latin hispanicus, from Hispania Iberian Peninsula, Spain

First Known Use: 1584

3. Woodstock is an international school. There are children from all over the world including Hispanic children.


Word 2: Buoyed


1. Buoyed by the results, city officials also announced Thursday that the restrictions on school vending machines were being expanded to machines in all city buildings, and that they were forming a multiagency task force to recommend further initiatives to combat obesity.


2. Meaning: to keep afloat
Origin: 1596


3. Buoyed by the decision of the high school, the students begged the Head of High school to forgive them.  


Words 3: Plagued


1. Because of coordinated, sustained action I am happy to say our children are benefiting from our campaign against obesity, which has plagued communities here in New York and across the nation for nearly three decades.


2. Meaning: to smite, infest, or afflict with or as if with disease, calamity, or natural evil
Origin: 15th century


3. The world is plagued with crime.

December college essay 2

It has been said [by Andy Warhol] that “in the future everyone will be famous for fifteen minutes.” Describe your fifteen minutes. (New York University)

I have never been the shy types. I have always liked being on stage in front of an audience. I think this quality came to me because of my mother. I remember once I participated in a school dance competition just because my Mom wanted me to (I guess I was in grade 1). So, my Mom made up dance steps for me, and it sure was fun learning how to dance with my Mom! And when the big day arrived I must admit I was a little nervous. But once I got on stage, I liked the cheer of the crowd and the eager faces of the judges. And believe it or not, I actually won the competition! And I loved the fifteen minutes of fame I got. I loved every second of those fifteen minutes. I loved the applause the wishes and the look on my mother’s face and just the feeling of being better than others for fifteen minutes. And from then I do not remember refusing anyone to go on stage for anything.

And slowly I developed a love for music. Actually, I think I always had it in me. I learnt to play the guitar, and people said that I sang well. So I auditioned for the school band (I was in Army Public School then). I got chosen as the lead singer of the band called Apotheosis (sounds so dramatic, but really, we were a bunch of chilled out teenagers fallen in love with music). We did a couple of gigs here and there. And the feeling I used to get when I was on stage in front of the microphone with a guitar in my hands was just unexplainable. The screams of the crowd, the hoots, the stage lights, and the music which we made, all had something to add to the feel. Yes, the little tummy turns still do occur right before going on stage, but once I’m there, I don’t look back, and I take in every moment.

So I would want my 15 minutes of fame the same way; on stage, in front of the mic with a guitar in my hands, with my band, Apotheosis, and the crowd screaming their heads off.

December college essay 1

Write about a time you found something you weren’t looking for. (U of Chicago)

It happens to me quite often. I start looking for something, and I end up finding something completely different, but more amusing than the thing I was looking for. It happens a lot with my Dad. My Mom and Dad are separated and I live with my Mom so I don’t see my Dad so often. But I find him in the places I least expect him. Railway stations, airports, my school, my home, and everywhere I don’t expect him to be.

Once I was walking down the high school ramp after school got over. I was thinking about what there was for tea. Ice-creams, cakes, or those greasy pakodas.  Instead of all this, I found my Dad with my Grandmother on the red bleachers, waiting for me, sitting and smiling, expecting me to give them a hug. I was shocked to see him. And even more shocked to see my old grandmother, smiling, showing her dentures. At first I was embarrassed. I mean, it was a normal school day and all my friends were there. Even they looked pretty shocked, but then I thought to myself, why I was embarrassed. I mean, I am studying in a boarding school and children here die to see their parents so why should I not be happy to my Dad and my Grandmother after so long? So I went to them and gave them a hug. I asked how they just decided to come to meet my sister and me. And the reply I got was, “We were missing you.” I found something I wasn’t looking for. And I was happy to find it.

"Human rights" is a term frequently used but seldom defined. What rights should belong to every human being? Discuss.

 Humans are interesting beings. They make their own rules and regulations and hardly follow them. Human right is a big example. Countries and different organisations make thousands of doctrines on human rights but there are still so many people in the world that are not even aware of their rights and people do not even bother to make them aware. The doctrines made by the United Nations state that every human has a right to freedom and that everyone should be treated equally. But when I look around myself, I do not see everyone following it. Why are women still treated like reproducing machines in some part of the world? Why they are not allowed to go out without a man escorting them? Why is it legal for a man to have more than one wife in some part of the world? Why do some women have to suffocate in a Burkha? Why do some of them have to fight for the right to drive in their own city? There are still so many countries where women are not considered equal as men. And according to me, women rights are the most important human rights, if they are followed by every person on this earth, other rights such as right to equality, right to freedom of speech and right to education will be covered, because most of the time women are the ones who get suppressed and with them all these rights.

It is completely inhuman to think of women as being inferiors. They are an integral part of the society and deserve to have all the rights that men have and they deserve to be respected. It is a shame to humanity to see women in some part of the world who are treated as a piece of furniture in the house when there are ladies who are working and earning all by themselves. We should at least give them a chance to prove what they can do for the society.

We humans think that we are the strongest and we have the power and the mind to make all the right decisions but we should always remember; there is a difference between a human being and being human.

What is your approach to life? Reveal your life philosophy.

Live and let live

Smile and forgive

Everyone makes mistakes

Even I have burnt cakes

It is too short to have regrettes

Too precious to give away to drugs and ciggerettes

But it surely is long when it comes to dreams

There is place for eveyone’s needs

It will sometimes throw you down

But don’t let people push you around

Get back up on your feet with all that is there

Look around and you will see people who actually care

You are special to someone

You are loved by someone

There is love for everybody here

Some people are just luckier

Don’t care what people think who you are

Just be yourself cause you know you’re a star

But advise is something you must not ignore

Specially when it comes from people who love you more

In the end it all depends on you

What you decide to gain and what you decide to loose

This was a poem I had written when i was fourteen. I saw the question and remembered this poem and i think it goes with the question perfectly!